Jazzy's Choose Your Own Adventure Chapter 3

17. Sep, 2015

When Things Got Weird - Part 3

“Ew!” I shrieked. Mr Quarterbrain looked up.

“Well then, pick it up!” He sneered.

I stared at him. Why in the world would I want to pick up a maggot-infested old sandwich? I bent down to reach for it and...

“Mr Quarterbrain, you’re needed in the office,” A very familiar voice called. Anastasia! She winked at me.

“Great.” Mr Quarterbrain stomped off.

“Phew, looked like you needed help.” Anastasia laughed. For a moment no-one spoke. “Sorry about this morning.” She confessed. “It’s just that I’ve never seen anyone covered head-to-toe with green goop.”

“That’s all right,” I accepted. We hugged, and I sighed, happy to have a friend again. I wondered what would happen next.

*

Sitting in maths class, I tried to avoid the stares directed at me.

“14”

“28”

“42”

“56”

“70”

“83 – I mean, 84”

“98”

“112”

The mundane drone of voices faded. I thought back to this morning and how ordinary things had seemed. Now I was totally embarrassed and wished I had never got out of bed this morning.

“154”

“166,” I mumbled as I stood up and down like a jack-in-a-box.

“It’s 168! Haven’t you been paying attention, Miss McKenzie?” Mr Quarterbrain thundered.

I stood up to start again: “14.”

Everyone else repeated their number. I was bored. I walked over to my bag to sneak in a snack, turned around and freaked out when I looked across the classroom...


What was this strange thing I saw? Make your choice here by Friday 25th September to see what happens next:

A. The monster from my nightmare is sitting in my seat

B. The boy sitting next to me is copying my work

C. Mr Quarterbrain is clucking like a chicken

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Jazzy's Choose Your Own Adventure Chapter 2

8. Sep, 2015

When Things Got Weird - Part 2

I screamed. The playground fell silent and the whole school, including my teacher, Mr Quarterbrain was staring at me. I felt my cheeks flush rose pink. Everybody burst into laughter. No wonder, I was covered from head-to-toe with oozing green slime!

“BE QUIET!” Mr Quarterbrain roared. “Miss McKenzie, why in the world are you covered in green gunk?”

 “Um... I was feeding the chooks and they sneezed on me?” I answered hopefully. Everybody started laughing again.

“Quiet! Come Miss McKenzie and I’ll hose you off,” Mr Quarterbrain barked. His small piggish eyes glinted as he picked up a hose.

The hose was the worst thing I had ever experienced. The water rained down like a spray of bullets. I wanted to scream more, but the school was watching me so I kept my mouth shut. The green slime slowly came off, but the hose didn’t stop. For what felt like an hour or two I stood there helplessly as the water plummeted on my head hard. My hair stuck to my scalp as my brain shouted, “Run.” Every single child was watching me. This was extreme torture.

Mr Quarterbrain turned off the hose and said, “Stay back at lunchtime in my room and I’ll tell you what your detention is.”

Are you crazy? I thought. Hadn’t I already had enough punishment?

*

I sat on an uncomfortable, plastic yellow chair as Mr Quarterbrain announced my detention. First he rambled about how disrespectful I was to the community and how I disrupted the calmness of the playground because I was covered in “chicken snot”. A snort of laughter escaped from my mouth and I covered it up quickly.

He glared at me. “You are to do rubbish duty. Now!”

I trudged outside next to Mr Quarterbrain over to the rubbish-infested playground. “You will have to pick up EVERYTHING!” He sneered.

I walked over to a huge pile of rubbish and started tossing some in the bin. Frozen Orchy’s wrappers, empty chip packets and squashed milk cartons. I looked down to see an object on the ground and felt a stab of horror...

What did I see? Choose A, B or C and vote in my Comments before 10am Saturday September 12.

a. A headless snake

b. My homework ripped to pieces

c. A cheese sandwich squirming with maggots

Jazzy's Choose Your Own Adventure

30. Aug, 2015

Let’s have some fun. This week I have decided to start a Jazzy’s Choose-Your-Own-Adventure series. Each week I will write part of a story and leave three options. Vote here in the comments to choose where the story goes next. Here it is…

When Things Got Weird – Part 1

“Help!” I cried as the 5-legged beast chased after me. Its claws clicked as green slime dripped off them. Its bulging red eyes stared straight into mine as I kicked, yelled and screamed. Its monstrous body was covered with a large shell and rows and rows of gigantic spikes. This is the end, I thought as it bent down, raised its claws and…

I woke up, sweating. That was one bad nightmare! I glanced at the watch on my bedside table. 8:30 already? I would be late for school, so I sprinted out of my room, stumbled down the stairs and made myself some breakfast.

After I had wolfed down some Weetbix, I bolted outside to feed my hens, Melissa and Margaret. I felt as if someone was watching me but had no time to worry and rushed back inside. I swung my schoolbag over my back, headed to the garage and jumped in the car. My big sister was already strapped in. She smirked and smiled at me, but didn’t say anything.

The car screeched as it parked at Blottom Blutt Public School. A few kids pointed and stared at me. I wondered what was wrong. Maybe they were just doing it to amuse themselves. I said, “Goodbye!” to my sister and she laughed and slammed the car door. She’s acting strangely today, I thought.

The first person who walked up to me at school was my best friend, Anastasia. Instead of her normal cheery hello, she laughed in the same unusual way as my sister had and walked away. As she was going, she yelled, “Look down at yourself!”

I did. And I gasped in shock.

It's time to choose what happens next. Here are the options:

A. I was covered in green slime.

B. I brought Margaret the chicken to school.

C. I am wearing my pyjamas.

Please leave your choice of A, B or C in my Blog comments and the most popular outcome will be written next week. Get your votes in by 6pm Friday September 4. Happy voting!

MS Readathon Ultimate Story Competition

23. Aug, 2015

This week I would like to share with you my contribution for the MS Readathon’s Ultimate Story Competition. This challenge is where three chapters are written by different authors and the entrant writes the fourth. Chapter 1 was written by the 2013 winner Maja Vasic, I wrote Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 has been done by Deb Abela. Participants must be registered in the MS Readathon and have raised at least 20 dollars. Good luck! To read the other chapters and for details on how to enter CLICK HERE. Writing this chapter took a lot of hard work. I would love to hear your feedback. 

The Heart of Ebony - Chapter 2

Allegra felt a warm rush come to her cheeks as she gazed into the familiar, stormy grey eyes. Hairs stood on her back and goose bumps rose all over her body. She felt like she was suspended in mid-air, looking down at the person who had been her companion for years. “Uncle?” She asked uncertainly, but hopefully, and sprinted towards him.

“Oh, my dear Allegra!” He exclaimed. “I thought I’d never see you again”.

“I-I thought y-you were – we all thought you had –”

“Sweetheart, no-one knows what happened to me. I escaped from a POW camp. Has the war ended yet?”

“Yes, Uncle.” Tears streamed down Allegra’s face as she clung on to him, never wanting to let go. He winced, and Allegra stood back to take a look at her beloved Uncle Alastair. Instead of being active as he once was, he was hunched over and held a crooked branch for a walking stick.

“Uncle, you’ve changed!”

“I know, dear.” He said wearily. “The war affected me. I was captured with my troop and imprisoned. It was terrible there. We were mistreated and only given bread to eat. The drinking water was filthy. Every captive was eager to escape, so together we thought up a genius plan, distracting the guards and breaking out under the dark of night. We escaped. I swam rivers, climbed rugged mountains and looked everywhere, but I couldn’t find home. I ended up in this forest, lost, bedraggled and confused.”

“Have you forgotten about me?” Complained the girl across the room.

Uncle Alastair laughed hoarsely. “Let me introduce you to Maple. If it weren’t for her, I wouldn’t be here. She nursed me back to health.”

“Maple? That’s a nice name.” Allegra offered.

“This is getting too cute.” Maple said and then disappeared in a puff of smoke. Allegra watched with wide eyes.

It was only then that Allegra noticed that despite the elegant furnishings, the room was dark and musty. That was when she realised that she was actually INSIDE A TREE.

“Forest nymphs.” Uncle Alastair muttered. “Never know how to take a compliment.”

“Sh-she’s a forest nymph?” Allegra stammered, still amazed.

“Forest nymphs are protectors of the wilderness. If something disrupts the wild - disrupts the system - they try to put things back to normal. And they have quite a big ego, mind you.”

 “I heard that!” Came a voice from the next room. Maple walked in, smirking. Suddenly, a powerful bang shook the entire tree. All three fell to the floor and had barely pulled themselves up when it happened again.

“The Heartless Horror!” gasped Maple, her face ashen with fear.

“Whatever you do, don’t go outside,” Uncle Alastair yelled over the repeated crashing.

“The Heartless Horror?” Allegra asked.

“It’s after me, it wants to take me to its master, Sir Peril,” Maple sobbed.

The biggest thud that had sounded yet hurled everyone out the window. Allegra rose, rubbing her bruised rump. She noticed a massive monster head-butting the tree trunk. It stopped and roared to the sky. Allegra’s heart skipped a beat as it slowly turned to face her. A snarl escaped its beak. The Heartless Horror was a beast beyond her imagination, with an orange horn and a set of yellow spikes that set down its ragged back. It stood higher than two elephants stacked together and had razor-sharp teeth. Slimy, green scales covered its body and it smelled like spoiled milk. Most terrifying of all were its red eyes with black pupils staring hard at her as if they could bore through her mind.

Allegra looked around for her companions. Maple was on the ground, unconscious from the fall and Uncle Alastair was nowhere to be seen. The Heartless Horror charged at her. At the very last moment a sword appeared in Allegra’s hand. Her sword. She was overjoyed, but then it came back to her that she had to take down a terrible beast and that the chance of living was tiny.

Allegra clashed her sword with The Heartless Horror’s horn and jabbed at its stomach, missing. It roared so loudly that Allegra was thrown from her feet, her sword flung into the bush. It charged again. Allegra sprung up and moved sideways. She grabbed it by the neck, swung onto its head and held tightly to its loose skin as it screamed with fury. The creature snapped at her, an awful green odour spilling from the side of its mouth. Allegra could not breathe.

 “Allegra! Catch!” Her uncle shouted as he stepped out from the bush and tossed her the sword.

Allegra raised her arm, braced herself then did away with The Heartless Horror. The victorious heroine felt sick and relieved all at once.

“Allegra! What a performance!” Uncle Alastair laughed.

“What happened?” Asked Maple groggily, waking up.

“My niece just put up a courageous fight and won.”        

“Really? Maybe Allegra does have the heart after all to save Ebony Forest from Sir Peril before he takes control.”

Allegra stared at Maple, uncertain of her future…

Bewitching Books

18. Aug, 2015

“Books take me to faraway lands and places where my imagination goes wild”.

These are words I have shared during my recent visits to schools to talk about the MS Readathon. I love books and here is why I feel that way:

The Places You Go

Stories can have amazing locations. Think about the chocolate waterfall in Charlie and the Chocolate Factory or the icy world of Narnia. What about Emerald City in the Wizard of Oz, Middle Earth in The Hobbit and the secret garden in Frances Hodgson Burnett’s book of the same name? Best of all, you get to go to places like the spooky graveyards in the Skulduggery Pleasant series.

The Characters You Meet

In books, you get to meet extraordinary people and creatures. Among my favourites are Buckbeak and Hermione Granger from the Harry Potter series. I can meet a giant, plot with dastardly witches or enter the mind of a zombie named Scapegrace.

The Experiences You Have

When you read a book, you get to try things you may have never dreamed possible. Sometimes you are taken to a stormy sea with roaring winds or even into a mysterious forest where you fight against howling werewolves. Awesome, right? Among the pages of Matilda, I find myself in a classroom as the main character, facing the towering Trunchbull who is accusing me of making a glass of water fall over. Oh, the experiences you have when you read!

The Time Zones You Visit

Books take you to other time zones. You can be taken back to the Victorian age like in A Little Princess, nineteenth century India in The Jungle Book or even be whooshed into the future. In The Riddle of the Trumpalar, Cass and Carl go to different eras in a time tunnel.

Books are magical: They take you to faraway places, introduce you to fascinating characters and give you incredible experiences, all from the safety of your armchair.

Image: Copyright © Jazzy's Bookshelf 2015 and Edwin Rhemrev